I like how you've included who is going to feature in your video and where you want to film. Think about the target audience and whether it will be illustration, amplification and disjuncture.
I really like the setting for your video and feel the artist matches the song well. As you are doing a performance and narrative video have you considered including the acuoustic guitar in it as i feel this could really add to the video seems as it plays such as dominant part in the artists backing music.
I like the setting for your video and think it'll work well with your song choice, I also like how you've included inspirational artists in your video.
I like the fact that you have a clear understanding of the style of music and artist you want to create and you have also made it clear where you have taken inspiration from. The chosen dress styling for the artist is casual and fits well the the locations where you want to film.
The combination of neutral coloured styling and an outdoor setting complement one another well.
ReplyDeleteI like how you've included who is going to feature in your video and where you want to film. Think about the target audience and whether it will be illustration, amplification and disjuncture.
ReplyDeleteI feel your band name and song go well with each other, which shows your good research.
ReplyDeleteI liked your pitch, and feel that the ideas you have fit in with the genre and song. I think you should consider who the target market is.
ReplyDeletePitch was good and the song choice is also good, also the outdoor setting will make the video interesting to watch.
ReplyDeleteI like the name of your artist. I'm intrigued to see what your ideas are for the video. Will it be performance based?
ReplyDeleteThe styling of your artist compliments the style of song and genre. Do you have a target audience in mind?
ReplyDeleteI think the song choice will work well with style you aim to create. I like the name of the artist, have you thought about a target audience?
ReplyDeleteI really like the setting for your video and feel the artist matches the song well. As you are doing a performance and narrative video have you considered including the acuoustic guitar in it as i feel this could really add to the video seems as it plays such as dominant part in the artists backing music.
ReplyDeleteI like the setting for your video and think it'll work well with your song choice, I also like how you've included inspirational artists in your video.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you have a clear understanding of the style of music and artist you want to create and you have also made it clear where you have taken inspiration from. The chosen dress styling for the artist is casual and fits well the the locations where you want to film.
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