I like how you have used the CD cover art for your magazine cover as well. The title pf the digipak is simple and I like how your digipak is related around nature. The collage on the back of the digipak is really nice, I like how you have arranged the images. One thing that I think you could do to improve your work is to maybe connect the images with the spin so that it looks like one piece.
I love your photography used on all the bottom squares. However, I feel the text you have used on your cover doesn't work as the orange is too bold and the text is too big. I also don't like the picture on the top as it is blurry and i feel it is half cropped off. the back page photos could have been edited better or just have one picture and it needs song titles. I like the fact that you have a set colour scheme of black, white, orange and green. These colours and the pictures used also show nature which is a theme and setting for your music video therefore it links well. I don't quite feel this is an authentic product yet but it isn't far off.
I love your photography used on all the bottom squares. However, I feel the text you have used on your cover doesn't work as the orange is too bold and the text is too big. I also don't like the picture on the top as it is blurry and i feel it is half cropped off. the back page photos could have been edited better or just have one picture and it needs song titles. I like the fact that you have a set colour scheme of black, white, orange and green. These colours and the pictures used also show nature which is a theme and setting for your music video therefore it links well. I don't quite feel this is an authentic product yet but it isn't far off.
I believe that both the artist, and the way that you have photographed him work well for 'publicising' or clearly marking the genre of the artist. the same goes for the black and white images and positioning of said artist. One slight issue in my opinion is the blurry image of the forest, I believe that it would work better with at least something such as an object in focus if not the whole image. otherwise, it has a very authentic feel to it.
i think that the photographs are not all put in well together and it looks quite rushed, however i like the actual photography, i also don't think that the orange colour is ideal, maybe you should reconsider this as it doesn't really look like a real album, but as a draft it is good and i think the final digipak will be good.
I personally feel that the photography you have on your digipak is very good and the fact that you have used the artist on the album cover is good as it makes it clear who the artist is. Some improvements I would suggest is trying out some different fonts and colors for the album, try inserting all of the photos on the back cover so that they are in a straight line and don't stick out as that detracts from the professionalism. Try and make the photo on the inside less blurry and lastly, it would be good to have a song list.
I like the nature element to your digipak and also how you've used a variety of colour and black/white effect. I think this digipak would be better if it had the song names somewhere on it so the listeners know the names of the songs they're listening to.
I like the monochrome colour scheme chosen for your magazine advert and believe the font style works well with the overall theme. I like how you have positioned the text and varied the sizes however, you could consider shortening the release date phrase to make it simple and catchy. It looks professional and authentic and overall works really well. I think you should follow the simplistic theme onto your album as there is quite a lot going on that makes it overwhelming. The main cover and image to the right look good so you should follow through with this. The inside image appears stretched so you could consider using different images for each panel or a plain background to reduce this problem. The images used in your collage all appear professional and fit with your theme; instead of a collage you could use these individually and I think this would work best.
I like the range of images you have chosen to use throughout the cover. They all match which adds professionalism to the piece. I feel that the front cover has a link to Ed Sheeran which may or may not have been what you are trying to create but this is created through the font itself, both the style and colour. I like how you have included the artist but not in a way that is too obvious. I feel the only improvement would be to ensure the image used on the top is not blurry as this takes away from the other good quality images used.
I like how you have used the CD cover art for your magazine cover as well. The title pf the digipak is simple and I like how your digipak is related around nature. The collage on the back of the digipak is really nice, I like how you have arranged the images. One thing that I think you could do to improve your work is to maybe connect the images with the spin so that it looks like one piece.
ReplyDeleteI love your photography used on all the bottom squares. However, I feel the text you have used on your cover doesn't work as the orange is too bold and the text is too big. I also don't like the picture on the top as it is blurry and i feel it is half cropped off. the back page photos could have been edited better or just have one picture and it needs song titles. I like the fact that you have a set colour scheme of black, white, orange and green. These colours and the pictures used also show nature which is a theme and setting for your music video therefore it links well. I don't quite feel this is an authentic product yet but it isn't far off.
ReplyDeleteI love your photography used on all the bottom squares. However, I feel the text you have used on your cover doesn't work as the orange is too bold and the text is too big. I also don't like the picture on the top as it is blurry and i feel it is half cropped off. the back page photos could have been edited better or just have one picture and it needs song titles. I like the fact that you have a set colour scheme of black, white, orange and green. These colours and the pictures used also show nature which is a theme and setting for your music video therefore it links well. I don't quite feel this is an authentic product yet but it isn't far off.
ReplyDeleteI believe that both the artist, and the way that you have photographed him work well for 'publicising' or clearly marking the genre of the artist. the same goes for the black and white images and positioning of said artist. One slight issue in my opinion is the blurry image of the forest, I believe that it would work better with at least something such as an object in focus if not the whole image. otherwise, it has a very authentic feel to it.
ReplyDeletei think that the photographs are not all put in well together and it looks quite rushed, however i like the actual photography, i also don't think that the orange colour is ideal, maybe you should reconsider this as it doesn't really look like a real album, but as a draft it is good and i think the final digipak will be good.
ReplyDeleteI personally feel that the photography you have on your digipak is very good and the fact that you have used the artist on the album cover is good as it makes it clear who the artist is. Some improvements I would suggest is trying out some different fonts and colors for the album, try inserting all of the photos on the back cover so that they are in a straight line and don't stick out as that detracts from the professionalism. Try and make the photo on the inside less blurry and lastly, it would be good to have a song list.
ReplyDeleteI like the nature element to your digipak and also how you've used a variety of colour and black/white effect. I think this digipak would be better if it had the song names somewhere on it so the listeners know the names of the songs they're listening to.
ReplyDeleteI like the monochrome colour scheme chosen for your magazine advert and believe the font style works well with the overall theme. I like how you have positioned the text and varied the sizes however, you could consider shortening the release date phrase to make it simple and catchy. It looks professional and authentic and overall works really well. I think you should follow the simplistic theme onto your album as there is quite a lot going on that makes it overwhelming. The main cover and image to the right look good so you should follow through with this. The inside image appears stretched so you could consider using different images for each panel or a plain background to reduce this problem. The images used in your collage all appear professional and fit with your theme; instead of a collage you could use these individually and I think this would work best.
ReplyDeleteI like the range of images you have chosen to use throughout the cover. They all match which adds professionalism to the piece. I feel that the front cover has a link to Ed Sheeran which may or may not have been what you are trying to create but this is created through the font itself, both the style and colour. I like how you have included the artist but not in a way that is too obvious. I feel the only improvement would be to ensure the image used on the top is not blurry as this takes away from the other good quality images used.
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